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The first Galliard who ever made the grade in The Bluepelt Sept was the
Get of Fenris Sjoerd Pieterse. Sjoerd had moved from Amsterdam to Delft
together with his brother Eddie Pieterse. Sjoerd was easily recognized for
his always with shirt and black jeans, and his constantly quoting of lines
from William Shakespeare plays. He was known mostly for typical Get like
aggression; it did not take much to get in to a fight with him. But Sjoerd
was more then a Get of Fenris combat machine. He was, together with his
brother a dedicated hunter for the Wyrm’s poison, that we call drugs. But
most of all Sjoerd was a real dedicated admirer of William Shakespeare,
(don’t mess with Will in front of Sjoerd!!). Before every battle he
fought, before every important call he made, Sjoerd told him self
Shakespeare quotes to get inspiration. He made it his thing to tell a Wyrm
creature a nice Shakespeare line just before delivering it the final blow.

Sjoerd was a member of the Sept during the first early years of the
Bluepelt Sept. He was one of the Garou in the front line when Bluepelt
launched his first big assault at the Wyrm in De Delftse Hout. It was the
first victory for the newborn Sept, but Sjoerd was never abele to claim
the credit he thought that he had deserved with this victory. In these
days Sjoerd was a member of Get pack Fangs of Valour. It was a time with a
real load of tension in Delft between the different tribes. Get and
Shadowlords got into aggressive arguments; witch often ended up in fights
between the members of the tribes. Sjoerd never made it no secret that he
respected but would never miss Garou like Carl Miller, Pawnbreaker or Dies
Last.

With his pack Sjoerd took part in the first mayor fights that the Bluepelt
sept fought. He was there when Beter Stort was attacked and he was there
when the Caern was found and recaptured. As he grew older Sjoerd filled
several positions in the Sept, he was Elder Galliard for a very long time
and after defeating his brother in a challenge for it, he was the Warder
of the Sept for a year. Although most of his pack members did, Sjoerd
never made it tot the status of Alpha or Beta of the Sept. It would not be
false to say that he would never be able to fill such a position.

After the defeat that the Fangs of Valour suffered at the Caern, Sjoerd’s
brother Eddie fell into harrano. It made him think that perhaps it was
time the leave Delft, to hand it over to a next generation. When just
after Sjoerd reached the rank of Adren, Knack a pack member died and after
that his pack splitted, he made the call; it was time to leave, time to
return to Amsterdam. And so he did. Together with his brother he returned
home, home were he still lives.

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 respected but would never miss Garou like [[Carl Miller]], [[Pawnbreaker]] or [[Dies-Last Dawnstalker]].
-With his pack Sjoerd took part in the first mayor fights that the Bluepelt
+With his pack Sjoerd took part in the first major fights that the Bluepelt
 sept fought. He was there when Beter Stort was attacked and he was there
 when the Caern was found and recaptured. As he grew older Sjoerd filled

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 After the defeat that the Fangs of Valour suffered at the Caern, Sjoerd’s
 brother Eddie fell into harrano. It made him think that perhaps it was
-time the leave Delft, to hand it over to a next generation. When just
+time they leave Delft, to hand it over to a next generation. When just
 after Sjoerd reached the rank of Adren, Knack a pack member died and after
-that his pack splitted, he made the call; it was time to leave, time to
+that his pack split, he made the call; it was time to leave, time to
 return to Amsterdam. And so he did. Together with his brother he returned
 home, home were he still lives.

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 Get of Fenris Sjoerd Pieterse. Sjoerd had moved from Amsterdam to Delft
 together with his brother Eddie Pieterse.  Sjoerd was easily recognized for
-his always with shirt and black jeans, and his constantly quoting of lines
+his always white shirt and black jeans, and his constantly quoting of lines
 from William Shakespeare plays. He was known mostly for typical Get like
 aggression; it did not take much to get in to a fight with him. But Sjoerd

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 Shakespeare quotes to get inspiration. He made it his thing to tell a Wyrm
 creature a nice Shakespeare line just before delivering it the final blow.
 Sjoerd was a member of the Sept during the first early years of the
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 Shadowlords got into aggressive arguments; witch often ended up in fights
 between the members of the tribes. Sjoerd never made it no secret that he
-respected but would never miss Garou like Carl Miller, Pawnbreaker or Dies
+respected but would never miss Garou like [[Carl Miller]], [[Pawnbreaker]] or [[Dies-Last Dawnstalker]].
 Last.
 With his pack Sjoerd took part in the first mayor fights that the Bluepelt